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I like it.

However if I may make a suggestion on the birdâEUTMs anatomy. The body is a bit lengthy. Unless you intentionally made the body on the eagle like that, birds donâEUTMt really have an abdomen they basically are a rounded little body that looks pretty much like theyâEUTMre all puffed out chest in front then the legs and tail The abdomen is almost absent. ItâEUTMs just one thing that caught my eye about the piece that could possibly be improved on. Other then that lovely job.

Ashe-Marbury responds:

Oh, I know the eagle's anatomy is not technically correct. :3

For the race itself, they're supposed to retain some human features from their human forms whenever they transform. That's how they were designed. That's also why in the picture I designed with the white wolf facing off with that giant cat that the giant cat has a more humanized belly than what would be considered the proper anatomy. ;)

Thank you for the critique though! :D

Nice and Creepy

I love the way you did this so simple yet very spooky and intense. I love the way you added a red background and then made the cloak blue making both stand out for itâEUTMs a warm vs. a cold color. The only thing I would have changed would have been the red colors on the lips and eyelids and the scars. I would have made them a little brighter or even giving them a shine look with that bright red color you used in the background to help draw the viewers eyes to the face more. However all and all, excellent job, itâEUTMs an absolutely wonderful piece.

inesive responds:

thank you for the review :)

Neat

I love your style of art on this. It looks absolutely awesome. Keep up the good work. I would defiantly love to see more of this sort of style.

wow

Oh man I just wanna go up and hug him. He has got such a cute smile on his face. >w<

Awesome

I absolutely love the pentagram and would like to know what program you used to create it or how you created it. <3

MagnusHarvest responds:

photoshop, you can almost do anything

Awesome work

ItâEUTMs a great picture I love her stance and the overall look of this work.

However one part of her anatomy looks off, around the lower torso area, it seems to be stretched just a little too much, though that could just be me. Then the wings and the tail need a little work to make them more believable. Maybe try to make the tail a little more smooth and fluid in itâEUTMs motion and look a little more rounded for it seems flat. As for the wings, study the wings of bats, it will give you some great ideas on how to create the wings. Also think of the wings as hands with extended fingers and webbing in between them. ItâEUTMs how I got good with my webbed wings and I love webbed wings. <3

Other then that I find it an awesome picture, the color values are great and you can draw the human figure better then I ever could. It's absolutely lovely, you've got talent so keep up the good work.

XPISigmaArt responds:

Yeah, I knew about those faults you mentioned. And the wings were totally slacked on heh. Thanks a lot for the review!

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